User talk:Domg8282

Francesco Guzzi article
Hello. I review new articles at Wikipedia and I have made some major changes to your submission. Your submission appeared to me to be little more than a resume. Resumes/self-promotion are not appropriate for Wikipedia (see What Wikipedia is not). In order to be accepted an article about a living person must have sufficient independent, reliable sources to establish the notability of the person. In other words, independent, reliable third parties must have written significant articles about the subject before he/she will be considered notable enough to be the subject of an encyclopedia article. I also took out some (not all) of the non-neutral language. Wikipedia articles are not supposed to promote the subject of the article, but rather merely state the facts in neutral and objective language. Words like "great success" and "bumped up the ladder again" etc. are not neutral and should not appear in your submission. Finally, I corrected some of the grammar as it seemed a bit awkward to me.

If you do not agree with my edits, feel free to undo them by clicking on the history tab of the article, then "undo" beside the record of my edit, and then save the article again. However, I am reasonably confident that your article would have been rejected as it was because it wasn't really an article at all - more like a lengthy resume. It may still be rejected because there aren't sufficient third party sources establishing the notability of Mr. Guzzi. I encourage you to continue to try to improve the article (for instance much less detail about Amex) and, if it is rejected before you have completed your improvements, please feel free to resubmit it when you are ready.

If I can be of any further assistance you can reach me at my talk page. Best Regards, Snowysusan (talk) 09:47, 21 October 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Legoktm (talk) 13:23, 27 October 2012 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Francesco Guzzi concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Francesco Guzzi, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 180 days. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 16:24, 20 August 2013 (UTC)