User talk:Dominic.fettig/sandbox

As a response to your feedback Dominic and I edited and proof read areas of our article that were a bit sloppy. Most of this involved changing wording of some sentences and/or words.SFurcht (talk) 18:33, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Feedback
Nice work on your article. Some changes you should still make before moving live Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:36, 3 December 2018 (UTC)
 * You need to make sure that each statement in the article can be connected to a source. The lead is fine (as long as everything in the lead section is covered in the body of the article) but everything else should have references. I have added citation needed tags in places where you should have citations, but don't currently.
 * Section headers should use sentence capitalization (only capitalize the first word and proper nouns) not title capitalization.
 * Consider linking terms that the average reader might not be familiar with, so they can learn more about the terms you use.