User talk:Dominic Raymond/talk page tutorial

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 * Hi! Can you give me any advice for improving this article?--Dominic Raymond (talk) 12:30, 21 August 2018 (UTC)

Article evaluation
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pittsburgh_Pirates

Content Evaluation Tone Evaluation Sources Evaluation
 * Everything on page is relevant. No distractors
 * No out of date information apparent
 * The page's information is expansive and holistic
 * The article is neutral
 * No specific perspective presented
 * Links work and are reputable
 * The links are properly done — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dominic Raymond (talk • contribs) 12:52, 21 August 2018 (UTC)