User talk:Dotytwo/sandbox

I believe the first sentence of the attendees section can be expanded on and sourced. Sentences such as "Detailed issues relating to water transportation, infrastructure in the context of water storage, sustainable distribution, innovation for conservation, and accelerating efforts for new technologies." could be better written with verbs such as "were discussed." Overall a great article! Paigepietras (talk) 05:58, 23 February 2017 (UTC)