User talk:DougGirard19

Welcome!
Hello, DougGirard19, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Copyright and plagiarism
Hi, it looks like some of the material that you added to the article was taken verbatim from this site, which has copyrighted the text. This means that it cannot be added to Wikipedia verbatim, as the site's copyright is too restrictive. This poses an issue of not only copyright, but also plagiarism as you had added the content as if it was your own work. Some of the material was also taken from the Wikipedia article Prisoners' rights in international law without attribution. You can use it, however it does need to be attributed. Finally, another part of the content was taken from here and while there is no stated copyright on the document, it's assumed that all content is copyrighted to its creator under a restrictive copyright unless it's clearly stated as falling into the public domain or under a compatible Creative Commons license.

All work should be in your own words. A good way to help avoid this is to take notes on the material and then summarize your notes in your own words. Please review the training module on plagiarism and copyright, thanks.

In this situation I do have to say that a very brief summary of the prisoners' rights would suffice, as there's no need for such a detailed description of rights. As stated in my last note, this material should be written as a brief overview to show how this pertains to the case, such as "In his rebuttal he stated that the dismissal of the case violated the UN Standard Minimum Rules for the Treatment of Prisoners" or "In his case So-and-So remarked that he felt his rights as a prisoner were being violated, specifically this guideline and this one." There's not a need to outline all of the laws or the history of the laws, especially as this isn't really a case of how the plantiff was treated in prison. Mayo was filing suit against Satan and his minions, not the prison system. For example, if Mayo were to sue a family member for mistreatment they caused throughout his life then the prisoner guidelines wouldn't be relevant here unless the prison were to unjustly bar him from resources that he could use to prepare the case or to punish him for filing a lawsuit. The reason for this is that Mayo was filing suit against external forces that the prison had no control over, so they don't relate to how the prison treated him. Replacing the family member with Satan, you can see where the prisoner rights and laws information doesn't really have any relevance here other than Mayo happening to be a prisoner. Now if they do come into place somehow, this needs to be specifically stated and put into context. Keep in mind though, that not all legal matters are limited to only prisoners such as in forma pauperis. Claiming this isn't limited to prisoners, as it can be successfully claimed by anyone who sufficiently shows that they cannot afford the cost of court. As far as the case getting thrown out, that also doesn't really relate to prisoner rights, as this would have almost certainly ended the same way even if Mayo was a free man. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:42, 1 November 2018 (UTC)

Ways to improve Seize Glory
Thanks for creating Seize Glory.

A New Page Patroller Boleyn just tagged the page as having some issues to fix, and wrote this note for you:

"This has been tagged for 3 issues."

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can reply over here and ping me. Or, for broader editing help, you can talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

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Boleyn (talk) 09:10, 3 November 2018 (UTC)

Game trailers
Hi! I'm not really sure that the game trailer 'Seize Glory' is notable enough for an article. In most cases, advertisements won't gain the needed coverage to justify them having an article by itself. For every 1984, there are millions upon millions that get only passing mention - if even that. The commercial doesn't inherit notability because it is promoting a notable game or has notable people involved with its creation - you have to show where the advertisement has gained independent coverage.

As far as the existing sources go, this is a primary source since it's a press release issued by Activision. This is also a primary source since MPC Advertising helped collaborate on the commercial. These cannot show notability and as both are intended to advertise the game via the trailer, any and all claims should be taken with a huge grain of salt since the primary goal is to make the consumer see the trailer, and thus the game, in a very positive light.

What I recommend here is that you summarize this into a few lines of content and mention it in the main article for CoD:Black Ops III, in the marketing section. However make sure that you don't add any personal interpretations or commentary of the trailer - it must be written in a neutral point of view and really only have the most basic facts. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:27, 5 November 2018 (UTC)

Gender pay gap
Hi Doug, just a heads up, I've reverted your edit at gender pay gap because it was unsourced and written in an unencyclopedic tone. Please make sure that any further edits to the article are sourced with reliable sources. Also, as a side note, please don't mark large edits as "minor". The "minor" flag should only be used for edits that don't change the content of the page, like typo and grammar fixing, or other small adjustments. &spades;PMC&spades; (talk) 20:36, 6 December 2018 (UTC)

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Citrivescence (talk) 19:30, 27 December 2018 (UTC)