User talk:Douglas Firs/Sandbox

It seems that some of the hyperlinks within the Wikipedia page favored some people over others, where the writers and editors of the journal were only partially addressed. Additionally, there should not be a link to a page that does not exist yet for certain writers due to leading to additional content gaps within the page.

Other than these issues, there do not seem to be any major issues with neutral POV, frequent usage of citations, grammar, or pyramid writing style.

Ctadelman (talk) 17:12, 28 November 2018 (UTC)Ctadelman