User talk:Dougsitt/sandbox

The grammar in the last sentence should be Russian fairy tales have been extremely popular and are still used for plays today. The section feels a little bare overall as well. You should also add in some hyperlinks to make your section easier to understand when you expand. --Ghurley1 (talk) 14:18, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Some of your sentences could be edited for grammar reasons. The sentences that begin with "influences" and "Russian fairy tales" should be followed by "have" rather than "has." Possibly for future writing, you could add historical influences to fairy tales. Mtatherton18 (talk) 14:21, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

This is a cool topic but I'm kind of confused about your first sentence, maybe give some examples of influences even if they are made up. Also, "Fairy" doesn't need to be capitalized. Caranlee (talk) 14:23, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

The paragraph seems pretty interesting, but in total it is a little weak and could use more examples, and clearer explanations. First off, the quote you use "'You don't as& questions about a tale,'" is a bit confusing. While the "&" is part of the quote you should add brackets to clarify. Additionally, the paragraph ends with " Russian fairy tales has been extremely popular and is still used for plays today.[2]" I would suggest adding examples of these fairy tales that are still prevalent. Samwolff450 (talk) 14:24, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

This is really repetitive; the message can be delivered in 2 sentences. I don't think you need the real long quote that's there. I think after chopping gonna need some more content. Maybe try talking about the influence of Communism and certain parts of Russian/Soviet history. I have a source I can send you. And I think you should put the citation where the quote is. Mlazarus14 (talk) 14:36, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

You have some good information, but I think you should check your grammar and spelling. Also, the first sentence sounds a little bit subjective and could be elaborated on more. You should also look for more content to put in your section after you revise. Montananelson (talk) 14:39, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Your page could use more detail, and was this "You don't as& questions about a tale" a typo or was it on purpose? Adding more detail into the sentences will help the readers to get a better sense of what you are trying to say. Maddywright (talk) 14:46, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Has been - into have been. I would add much more content to your page. It does not offer any valuable information except for one quote. Barborale (talk) 17:02, 5 April 2019 (UTC)

You might want to read over your paragraph again to take out any typos. You have a good amount of content for the amount of citations you have but adding other headings with more content would be helpful. Charlieaabrams (talk) 18:18, 6 April 2019 (UTC)

I think you should add informations and facts. As well as examples and use more sources. 1oromo (talk) 19:59, 6 April 2019 (UTC)

Adding some more examples and information will help to give your article more content. Larainal (talk) 18:03, 7 April 2019 (UTC)

This would be better if there was more history and factual evidence to back up the claims. Sallyfried (talk) 18:34, 7 April 2019 (UTC)

You need to add internal links and use more sources. More information should also be added for this section. Good start.Dmastronardi (talk) 18:40, 7 April 2019 (UTC)