User talk:Dovlib19

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yehiel Gozal (March 3)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 05:28, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yehiel Gozal (May 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AaqibAnjum was:

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Aaqib Anjum Aafī (talk) 02:21, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

If we checked the citations, we could see where the cited information comes from. But where does the rest of the information come from? If you had a source for it, why have you not cited it? -- Toddy1 (talk) 08:32, 17 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Comments by another user
 * Lede - adequate citations.
 * Biography - bad section title - no citations.
 * Military Service - this has 7 paragraphs. One sentence in the 4th paragraph, and one in the 6th paragraph have citations.  The rest is uncited.
 * Chairman of the Paratroops Heritage Association - two paragraphs with no citations.
 * CEO of the Yahad-United for Israel's Soldiers Fund (UFIS) - four paragraphs - 2nd paragraph has citations. The rest is uncited.
 * Personal life - two sentences with one citation.

There would also be value in trying to find a date for some of the citations. I admit that with some this could be hard - but often the information makes more sense if the reader knows when it was written/published. Even an access-date would be useful - since URLs are not forever, an access date would help in finding an archived copy. -- Toddy1 (talk) 08:36, 17 May 2020 (UTC)

WP:RSEDITORIAL says: "Editorial commentary, analysis and opinion pieces, whether written by the editors of the publication (editorials) or outside authors (op-eds) are reliable primary sources for statements attributed to that editor or author, but are rarely reliable for statements of fact." The following source is marked as "opinion" by the Jerusalem Post, so its reliability is questionable. Please also note that The Jerusalem Post is a newspaper. So, you should have {{cite not {{cite web, and |work=The Jerusalem Post not |website=jpost. The citation template should have |date= 2 February 2017. You got the author wrong: it should says |first1=Greer Fay |last1=Cashman, not |publisher=GREER FAY CASHMAN -- Toddy1 (talk) 08:54, 17 May 2020 (UTC)
 * {{cite web |title=Grapevine: A 10-gallon hat for Galant |url=https://www.jpost.com/opinion/grapevine-a-10-gallon-hat-for-galant-480413 |website=jpost |publisher=GREER FAY CASHMAN}}

There is no objection to non-English sources. And giving the original language title is good, e.g. |title=רס"ן יחיאל גוזל . But there is also a |trans-title= field in the citation template, where you can put a translation of the title in English.  Since I assume that you understand both Hebrew and English, this will not be a great burden for you. -- Toddy1 (talk) 08:57, 17 May 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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1292simon (talk) 05:56, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yehiel Gozal has been accepted
 Yehiel Gozal, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! MatthewVanitas (talk) 06:49, 29 May 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yaron Be'eri (September 3)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Nightenbelle were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Nightenbelle (talk) 21:38, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yaron Be'eri (January 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chicdat was:

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🐔 Chicdat  Bawk to me! 11:08, 23 January 2021 (UTC)