User talk:Dpappa3/sandbox

Copyedit an Article
Good job on your first assignment! Josef Horáček (talk) 20:37, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Adding Sources
You were supposed to add two sources to a single article. It looks like you chose to work on two different article instead. However, since the overall value of your contribution will be about the same, I will accept it.

Your sources look relevant and reputable. Go ahead and add them to the articles within the next week.

Just one small detail. Is there supposed to be a colon in the title of your first source? Something like this: "All About Amelia: The Amelia Bloomer Project." Josef Horáček (talk) 20:04, 3 March 2018 (UTC)


 * I'm confused. It appears that the source for "Amelia Bloomer Project" has already been added to the article, but not by you. I did see that you added the source to "Ray Charles," but it was a bit redundant because the information you're supporting is already supported by another source. We'll have to stop here. Let's consider this assignment finished. Josef Horáček (talk) 02:37, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead
You chose a great article to work on, and your draft looks good. You don't need the last paragraph about the subject's personal life in the lead. Delete it, and add the lead to the article within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 17:41, 1 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Excellent job! This really improved the article. You're done! Josef Horáček (talk) 02:39, 1 May 2018 (UTC)