User talk:Dpepowski/sandbox

This looks excellent - you have a great purpose and sources behind this article. Keep in mind that the sources on the French-language article may "link" back to English sources. You can also cite French-language sources in an English article. Thea365Instructor (talk) 16:33, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

Looks good! Your lead is a little short, but that shouldn't be an issue. As you write your article more relevant information may become apparent. I've seen your note asking for help and I'll be in touch by next week! Thea365Instructor (talk) 23:25, 4 May 2018 (UTC)

Valen's Peer Review
Really great job organizing your articles/sections. Very straightforward and easy to follow. I love that you dedicate some of her article to talk about her childhood, upbringing, and background, as it really puts her work in context.

You mention some awards Bhuchar has received. I would love to learn more about what exactly those awards are, if the information about the awards is available.

I would also love to learn more about Bhuchar Boulevard, including what specifically their mission statement may be, what kind of group it is (ensemble based, traditional theatre company, etc), and what work they have done, if that information is available.

Love the tables you've created. Very helpful and clear.

Also, remember to cite! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Valenmarie18 (talk • contribs) 21:11, 1 June 2018 (UTC)

Christian's Peer Review
Amazing first paragraph, chock full of information. However, I would reduce the list of works there and instead include that later on. Also, I would be careful of adding that she aims to attract a diverse audience since that could be misconstrued as more opinion based, and instead later on include examples of how her works attract a diverse audience.

Your Early Life and Education section is pretty solid, I have no notes on that.

The section on the Tamasha Theater Company should be expanded. Also, I realize that you've used quotes several different times. I would cut down on that and try to get information and then give the gist of it.

I don't know if you can do this, but the section on Bhuchar Boulevard should be expanded on.

Love the tables, I think they provide a lot of information clearly.