User talk:Dpere049/Linda Infante Lyons

I feel like the lead was informational because I felt I knew what was going to be talked about in the rest of the article. Which was Linda Infante Lyons's visual media artwork. Maybe some more information could be added about what was going to be shared in the article but overall it was informative to the main point of the article. Also, don't forget about the citation needed at the end of the second paragraph in the "paintings" subhead. Maybe you should add her Paintings and Photographs above "awards and fellowships" or before "themes" to balance the article. I think having her awards as the last paragraph seems better to top off the end of the article because it shows her achievements. You can add the links of where they talk and show her artwork in the "external links". In the "external links" maybe you could add the links that take us straight to her artwork that you mentioned. This will give us a good idea of what her art pieces look like. In your photography, Public Art, and Paintings was very informative on how Lyons got her ideas of her art pieces. I felt like I got a good understanding of what she was looking to go out and paint, take a photo of, or make art. Your article did a good job of providing neutral content. Don't forget to cite "Selected Exhibitions" and "Awards and Fellowships" if needed! Your sources are for the most part all different sites which good because you saw many different opinions and information.