User talk:Dqp5391/Financial technology/Mmh65 Peer Review

After reading the article in its entirety and referring back to the talk page, it was evident that this page needed some work and some of that was completed with the updated version. Comments are as followed:

• In the "industry context" section, I would try to eliminate the apparent bias toward a single musician. The reason for this change is necessary in a Wikipedia article because there should be no particular position for any specific topic. As a result of this, I would mention all of the players or at least some of them in a neutral manner to avoid the pertinent bias.

• In the "Definition" section there are two definitions listed that are essentially saying the same thing. It seems a bit repetitive and can be changed to either one or keep the first one. The second definition seems unnecessary and can be eliminated.

•Try to universalize the way you use "Fintech". Keep the spelling consistent as well as the capitalization of the letters. There is no specific one that is better but just try to keep them all the same.

• The citations and references look good and all seem to work. No additional work is needed there until you make new citations and add more references.

Mohammad Hussain