User talk:Dr.Mug/New sandbox History of the internet edits

Things to work on for your Week 9 continued edits:


 * Evaluate an article: Go back to your article evaluation and pull out the list of things you said you could improve on the existing article. Put that list here and cross things off as you do them (you can also edit what I have said on this talk page and cross things off as you complete them).
 * Copyedits: This was done correctly, just make sure it is clear what sections of the Wikipedia article these sentences are from.
 * Bibliography: This is a good start for a bibliography, but you should starting summarizing this work and possibly finding more to build out your contributions to the existing Wikipedia article.
 * Citing sources: You put your citation in the wrong space, but also did not add an actual sentence that you were adding a citation for. You need to start working on adding content with citations to your sandbox. As you do so make sure it is clear where these additions are going in the existing Wikipedia page.
 * Adding media/hyperlinks: You did not add the hyperlink for week 8, but you should also go through and see if there are more things that should be hyperlinks in whatever you add and the existing article. The image you added is fine, but be sure before you add media to the live Wikipedia article that it is actually necessary or contributes to the article (that is, you had to do it for this assignment, but in your final Wikipedia contributions don't add it just to add it).
 * Overall: You seem to be doing somethings asked for week by week, but now you really need to focus on the bigger picture of what you plan to add/edit here. Is there more in the existing article that needs copyediting? More citations you can use to expand on the sections you are working on? The more planning you can do now the easier it will be for you to chip away at those edits between now and November 22 when you need to move your final edits to live Wikipedia.

Adrishaw (talk) 15:50, 21 October 2020 (UTC)