User talk:Dr.Sam00

Sloan Wilson
Every paragraph needs an antecedent as it can be used an excerpt. In isolation, one which starts with "he" and never explains who "he" is would never stand without more context. Once per paragraph goes very well without sounding stilted. 2600:1004:B14C:D9B9:58ED:EC15:C5E5:7E85 (talk) 04:02, 25 January 2020 (UTC)
 * "He" in this instance is better as it is clear who is the person. Moreover, you should have used "Wilson" instead of "wilson". Regards Dr.Sam00 (talk) 04:17, 25 January 2020 (UTC)