User talk:DrGooner14/Women in Nigeria

Tomas' Peer Review

There does not appear to be any content in the sandbox to review.

Sam's Peer Review
Hi! I'm not sure if I'm on the wrong page but I don't see a draft yet. Would be happy to provide my peer review comments this week.

Sywarren (talk) 04:24, 4 April 2022 (UTC) Sywarren

Mandip's Peer Review
There is no information in the sandbox currently, so I'll just focus my review on the article as a whole. The article seems pretty well put together! Each paragraph is written very informatively and offers insight into the subtopic that it covers. I would suggest better separation of the subheadings to avoid confusion for readers! For example, under the 'Education' subheading, the article talks about female genital mutilation, girl child labor, domestic violence, prostitution, abortion and polygamy, before actually talking about women's education. These are very important topics, but might be better suited under the social issues subheading. I'm sure y'all are working on improving the article, and I would love to offer peer review feedback to the actual draft if it's posted anytime this week. Mbagri (talk) 04:30, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

Stephanie's Peer Review
I don't see any new edits to the sandbox as of now but there are some great additions I think you can look into! A section that I think needs some more context is the notable women in Nigeria. Most of it is lists women with no detailed stories, stats, etc. You could make a section for women in Nigeria in STEM and look into how many women are in this field and how some may have broken barriers. This can fit under "Women's Education". Much of the article focuses on the unfortunate place women have in the country. Although this is necessary, I would suggest adding some positive statistics that uplift women's progress, especially in modern times. I recognize that there is still more to be added and I would love to see it soon. Stephxm (talk) 05:41, 4 April 2022 (UTC)