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Nomination of Angelo Antonio Toriello for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Angelo Antonio Toriello is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

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Angelo Antonio Toriello
Hi DrKlain. As regards "hacking' I meant hacking away extraneous words (as a gardener would hack at an overgrown garden). The problem with the article is not that it has been translated, but that some of it is very difficult to understand. For example By nature extroverted, since young he has always drawn “attention” around him for his deeds and eccentricity. - this appears to suggest he is an exhibitionist, however the quote marks around "attention" are very confusing. If I pay attention to you, I pay attention to you- but if I pay "attention" to you that has an ambiguous, almost hostile, meaning. With regards to Toriello, it seems to hint that someone or some organisation has taken notice of his actions and is marking him down as an enemy. Ning-ning (talk) 05:58, 6 July 2013 (UTC)