User talk:Dr pharmacology

Your submission at Articles for creation: VLY-686 has been accepted
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VLY-686
Great work on your first article!

Here are a few things I noticed that could use some improvement:
 * 'Chronic Pruritus', 'Atopic Dermatitis' and 'Phase II proof of concept study' need wikilinks or explanation.
 * What is LY68017? That was my question until I read the History section. I think my solution would be to get rid of the History section, and mention this rename in the lead paragraph. Put LY68017 in bold, and create a redirect page called LY68017 which links to VLY-686.
 * You could probably find a tighter defined category than Chemistry.

If have any questions, do let me know my leaving a message here. Derek Andrews (talk) 14:17, 17 November 2015 (UTC)