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Designerly ways of venturing
In my last post, we explored how Design entrepreneurship combines science, culture, and values. This has led me to a new approach that we can only call ‘designerly ways of venturing’, one that involves mindsets, human sense perception, addressable problems, and even cognitive and reasoning perspectives. This harkens back to Nigel Cross’ original terms ‘designerly ways of knowing’ in 1981. Cross has an international reputation in design research, especially in fields of design methodology and the study of design cognition. Drfederico (talk) 18:29, 21 February 2020 (UTC)

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Nice start, but the tone isn't quite right for Wikipedia.


 * "Constantly questioning" isn't likely to be literally true, nor is "pain". Overall, this is a bit too "exciting" for an encyclopaedia entry.
 * You also need to make sure that there's at least one reference per paragraph, and no text after the final reference in a paragraph. That way it's clear, even as the page continues to be edited, which citations support which text.


 * A Wikipedia article isn't supposed to speak directly to the reader like this. The tone should be descriptive, not conversational. Avoid first or second person in Wikipedia articles.


 * When you refer to someone like this, it's best to use their full name, include a link in they have a Wikipedia article (I assume it's this Roger Martin?) and include a few words to say who they are. Otherwise the average reader will have no idea why they should give any weight to the opinions of this Martin person. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:45, 24 February 2020 (UTC)