User talk:Driscollhhd/talk page tutorial

Hello
This is a talk page message. It's from me, User:Ian (Wiki Ed). You can tell who it's from because it's got my username and a timestamp at the end.--Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) (UTC)
 * And this is a reply, from User:Sage (Wiki Ed). It's indented, to show how it relates to the previous comment.--Sage (Wiki Ed) (talk) (UTC)::Hi! Can you give me any advice for improving this article?--Driscollhhd (talk) 00:00, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi! Can you give me any advice for improving this article?--Driscollhhd (talk) 00:01, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

Hello
This is a talk page message. It's from me, User:Ian (Wiki Ed). You can tell who it's from because it's got my username and a timestamp at the end.--Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) (UTC)
 * And this is a reply, from User:Sage (Wiki Ed). It's indented, to show how it relates to the previous comment.--Sage (Wiki Ed) (talk) (UTC) :Hi this is my second attempt --Driscollhhd (talk) 00:03, 10 September 2021 (UTC)