User talk:Dritsher

Your submission at Articles for creation: List of Reveal Episodes (November 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

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David. moreno 72   00:40, 28 November 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Reveal (November 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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David. moreno 72   00:42, 28 November 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: List of Reveal Episodes (November 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tikuko was:

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 T K K ! bark with me! 14:49, 28 November 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Reveal (December 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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KJP1 (talk) 18:22, 21 December 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: List of Reveal Episodes (January 4)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:List of Reveal Episodes and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:List of Reveal Episodes, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and save.
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KJP1 (talk) 18:56, 4 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Reveal (January 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chrissymad was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Reveal and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Reveal, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and save.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Reveal Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Chrissymad&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Reveal reviewer's talk page].
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CHRISSY MAD ❯❯❯  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯  20:47, 22 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Reveal (March 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chrissymad was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Reveal and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Reveal, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and save.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Reveal Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Chrissymad&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Reveal reviewer's talk page].
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CHRISSY MAD ❯❯❯  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯  23:39, 18 March 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Reveal has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Reveal. Thanks!  — jmcgnh (talk) (contribs) 20:15, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

Your referencing style...
...is naked URLs. Follow the advice on how to convert these to appropriate format. And on the larger question, I suggest making the draft shorter and reducing the refs to the strongest types, i.e, nothing directly from Reveal, no interviews, no in-passing mentions. Given history, your best path is to get a concise article approved, and then over time use the Talk page of the article to recommend additions, so that a non-PAID editor can review and act upon. David notMD (talk) 14:19, 20 March 2018 (UTC)