User talk:Drobi036

Welcome!
Hello, Drobi036, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Talk page suggestions
Thanks for adding your suggestions. I have temporarily moved it to your sandbox, so we can clean up the formatting of your suggestions to prepare them for the actual Wikipedia page. I will add some comments and help you along the way. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to ask me. You can leave a message on my talk page if you have any questions. Please leave the draft in your sandbox for now. Remove my bolded comments (once you have added your content), insert the references using the PMID tool, and then I will help you paste it back onto the talk page. Thanks! JenOttawa (talk) 20:15, 1 November 2017 (UTC)

Your updated version in your sandbox
Great work with polishing your draft for the talk page. Would one of you mind going back and inserting all the citations using the tool? It will work in your sandbox. Once this is done, and WikiEdu has OK-d it, I will paste your blurb back into the talk page. Thanks for doing all these revisions! If you have any problems with the PMID tool, please let me know. Let me know if you need help inserting the same citation twice as well. Medical articles need a citation after every single sentence, even if is the same source. Thanks, JenOttawa (talk) 01:50, 3 November 2017 (UTC)

Could you help us out with the PMID tool? We have just been citing as was shown in class

Drobi036 (talk) 02:29, 3 November 2017 (UTC)

I am having a lot of trouble trying to clean up the references section. I try to cite one reference and when I preview or save another number comes up, and then there are a list of numbers before our reference list even starts.

Drobi036 (talk) 02:41, 3 November 2017 (UTC)

Great!
Nice job figuring out the references. Yes, looks like one citation is missing and the two textbooks need page #s. Leave me a message when this is done and we can transfer it. Thanks, Jenny JenOttawa (talk) 00:50, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I added the page number for reference 4; the first reference doesn't have a page, it is just updating to the new edition of the reference previously mentioned on the wiki page, and the member whose suggestion #7 said there's is an online textbook so there are no page numbers.

Drobi036 (talk) 20:25, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Ok thanks. I pasted it back on your talk page. Please follow and respond to comments/make further changes if needed.JenOttawa (talk) 02:19, 6 November 2017 (UTC)