User talk:Drowe002

Nice work!
Posted automatically via sandbox guided tour. Drowe002 (talk) 01:21, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
 * You should add a wikilink to the word melatonin, because it isn't explained|

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comments on cytoplasmic inclusions
I don't agree with you here about bias. It looks like you are reaching for something to criticize which is something to avoided on Wikipedia. Try to frame your comments in a positive manner and you will make friends and make things happen. It looks to me like the page just needs more detail and more added. I think there are protein type inclusions that are associated with diseases, like amyloid deposits and Lewy Bodies, hat could be added, although I am not 100% sure they count as cytoplasmic inclusions. It is also screaming out for images of these types of inclusions if you can find open access examples.Jparcoeur (talk) 18:12, 1 November 2015 (UTC)