User talk:Drpaulobianchi

Not quite ready
In my opinion, the article (here) is not quite ready to move into article space, but I think it can be fixed easily. I'll explain why, and remove the request to move this article into article space. Other editors may feel differently, so if you disagree with my reasons, feel free to replace the move request template, and someone else may move it for you.

It is important for Wikipedia articles to have references to reliable sources. While you have some items labeled as references, they are not formed as they should be. As a guide to including references properly, please see Citing sources and footnotes. Please add some references in the correct form to support the factual claims in the draft article.

You used the Article Wizard to start your article, which is a good thing. However, the template provided contains a section for External Links, and includes a dummy link, which doesn't go anywhere. You should either identify valid External links and add them, while removing the Example, or remove the whole section.

Apologies for the long delay in responding. Unfortunately, one editor created a template so that you could let people know when you thought a draft was ready, but no one created a process to review the requests. I stumbled across the list by accident, with a few hundred entries at the time, and have been working to respond to them as well as trying to find a more organized way to respond. I hope shortly to have a better process so that future request get more timely response.-- SPhilbrick  T  10:41, 1 June 2010 (UTC)