User talk:Drpudding/DrpuddingDraft

This essay was written very well and full of information. The essay had section headers and the breaks in paragraphs that made everything very easy to find and read. Looking at the APA citing for the sources at the end seemed to be a little incorrect with minor errors. Looking past the minor corrections in the citing, the sources were reliable and accurate. Lastly in some cases the use of commas were incorrect and some sentences were run on.