User talk:Drt1001/sandbox

This won't be ready to go by the end of class, but that's okay, you can keep working on it. Let your group work through Emma's piece first, which IS ready to go. Then, they might be able to help you trouble-shoot with those references. My sense is that they are probably duplicated, and that it might be safe to try deleting just the number 1 and see if you lose the reference (before you do this, cut and paste the entire thing into this talk page, so you definitely don't lose anything!!). But it's not just the references that are a problem here; it's also the need for editing of your sentences, and clarity around what those external links are. Take it as far as you can with your group, and call me me over if the three of you are stymied by the link issue. My guess is that you just got delayed and haven't been able to put the time into this that your classmates did? You've seemed distracted the past few weeksSsenier (talk) 01:34, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

This is coming along Dani! I'm not worried about you, but let me know if any particular questions come up for you.Ssenier (talk) 00:05, 10 April 2019 (UTC)