User talk:Drwbookman/Becoming (book)

Hey Drew, I love your topic and I also believe you did an excellent job explaining the outstanding book in a clear, straightforward manner. I do see your contributions to be good, however I believe it would be helpful if you discussed the "Becoming More" section of the book a tad bit more. When I read the synopsis, it seemed like this section of the book was cut off. I feel a sentence or two about the "Becoming More" section would complete it. I also would probably just make it a new sentence instead of saying "...and Becoming More describes...". (I know this sentence is not a part of your contributions) Also, did you mean "marital" commitments instead of martial? Nonetheless, I am now further motivated to read this book! I have the book but never got around to reading it because of the load school and work brings. I think I should have ample time now because of social distancing/quarantine though. Thank you for providing this overview of Becoming. It will be a good addition to the Wikipage! Jcross323 (talk) 23:02, 22 April 2020 (UTC)Jcross323