User talk:Dsgm3r/Gold digger/Jcrg34 Peer Review

review

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dsgm3r


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dsgm3r/Gold_digger?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gold digger

Evaluate the drafted changes
So the representation in media really stops after the 1950s in film, but there has to be more modern reprersentation. I also think that the law section could be a lot more deeply fleshed out with more sources, seesms like an incredibly interesting aspect of the article. It says in the article "he popularity of the gold digger image was a contributing factor to the nationwide push to outlaw heart balm laws in the middle and late-1930s in the United States". Maybe add a part that suggests what those laws being outlawed created in terms of economic hardship for women. It seems like you could bring up sexism related to women seen as gold diggers. Jcrg34 (talk) 20:04, 29 September 2022 (UTC)