User talk:Dsnu/sandbox

Courtney's review
I love the topic you have picked! Being a health science major who loves public health, I like that you are expanding on the community health page. It definitely could use your help :)

The organization of the page could definitely use some sections (depending on how you want to frame the page in general). An example would be giving primary, secondary, and tertiary pages sections if you want. The intro, how to measure, and categories in your sandbox are a great start. I like that you have added the definition from the WHO, I think it would help to distinguish the community health from the public health page. An idea I had might be adding in a brief mention of herd immunity. It already has a wiki page, but referencing its importance to community health and hyperlinking to the article might be cool. I like how you have a challenges and difficulties section. Although it is still in production, it adds to the neutrality of the article. I also think it would be a good idea to reference challenges to community health at both the larger level (i.e. national-if looking at US) and smaller level (i.e. does it vary state by state?). These could be sub-sections of this section.

Another section that might be an idea could be "current research". In this section you could reference studies or research currently being conducted in community health, or research recently published.

Overall, you are heading in the right direction and I think you'll do great!!! Cb31337 (talk) 17:45, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

== Good choice for an article, Dhruvil! I am actually surprised that it is not a fully developed page, so it is great that you are working on it! Breaking up the categories of study for community health is a good idea and once expanded, will provide a useful overview of approaches. Have you thought about including visuals? A few images as well as well-placed headings, etc. would also help to improve the visual organization of this page. It might be a good idea to reference some key individuals or organizations in this area as well.Amyc29 (talk) 03:24, 25 February 2018 (UTC)