User talk:Duenask638/sandbox

Leonek689 (talk) 16:34, 26 April 2018 (UTC) Hello

Peer review by Katie Leone
Justs you want to consider when revising your page: * Organize the events by the year * Add references and paraphrase the events * (Festival Hall, would be a nice subcategory to add) I encourage you to add another subcategory to stretch your creativity with the researching * Make sure you focus your attention on the history and make sure your information is clear and direct * Maybe consider adding how many visitors per year Overall, you have solid information. I would love if you add more information about the place just because I personally feel that you lengthen your research. * Once you add more information I would love to peer review before the conference so email me @ Katienicoleleone@gmail.com

Leonek689 (talk) 16:54, 26 April 2018 (UTC)