User talk:Duffyap2019/sandbox

- Not allowed to use direct quotes. - Make the section divisions a bit clearer, with different fonts or something - Be sure to add the links to your in text citations--link the resource so it goes to the bottom of the page when clicked. (specifically the first paragraph)

Children out of wedlock There is a strong correlation between children born out of wedlock and poverty.

Cultural Theory People who do not support the cultural theory usually believe a mixture of three ideas: slavery, the transformation of politics and cultures in the 1960s, and the enlightened progress of the economy.

Eriseyas2020 (talk) 18:50, 2 April 2019 (UTC)eriseyas2020

Human capital theory: In the sentence that starts with in other words: do not start this way because it sounds to conversational. reword the second sentence of the human capitl theory. Re-organize the flow of the topics. Talk about the theories first and then talk about children out of wedlock and the other sub topics. Go back and look for sentences that sound conversational and reword. Add citations and statistics for each of the theories No direct quotes — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rileyp2019 (talk • contribs) 18:57, 4 April 2019 (UTC)