User talk:Dumagoes/Evaluate an Article

Suggestions for Improvement
The author contributes greatly to the page of The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane. However, the article is lacking in detail in both the plot and theme sections of the wiki page. The article could elaborate more on the Edward Tulane's story. This would allow for the theme section to make more sense because it will show how and why the character develops. In addition to these points, the sources need to be reevaluated. The 3rd, 5th, 6th, and 7th source links do not work. Citing is of critical importance when discussing literature, so I would suggest finding new sources or fixing the links somehow. Besides these minor issues, the article is great in conciseness and organization. Dumagoes (talk) 22:42, 16 February 2020 (UTC)Dumagoes