User talk:Dunno.what.to.name

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Peer Review by Dunno.what.to.name
1. Article very thoroughly summarizes who Kiki Wolfkill is and what she did. There is also a good amount of information about her personal life such as what she did and where she studied, making it easy for the reader to understand. Sections are also organized clearly and given appropriate amount of information depending on their importance/significance.

2. However, there are a few places where the grammar can easily be improved (adding/removing commas). In addition, avoid using words such as "best", which may come across as biased, in order to maintain a neutral tone.

3. The second paragraph in the "career" section can be broken off into a separate section possibly titled "achievements" since it mostly talks about Wolfkill's awards/achievements.

4. My group can also replace some words with more neutral ones to keep the article sounding as neutral as possible.

5. I just added a few commas throughout the article as needed.

Dunno.what.to.name (talk) 05:23, 16 November 2020 (UTC)