User talk:Dupontgu/sandbox

Areas for improvement 1. You should proofread the article again. The information is very good but there are some typos. There are also some phrases that could be worded better. The first sentence drags on a bit. 2. Under your heading “in popular culture,” you could expand more. Also, you could expand more under the “Replicating the study” section. 3. Adding a picture would bright up the page. We also think you could use more examples throughout the article.

Strengths: 1. You do a great job of linking words or phrases to other pages. You also do a great job with citations and references. We also like how you listed other Wikipedia pages that are similar to your topic. 2. Overall the article has a lot of good information. The research looks valid and accurate, and we think the article is very organized and flows well. The headings and spacing make it easy to read. 3. We really like your section called “Recent Research.” We feel that these examples allow us to relate to the subject.

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