User talk:Durbi81

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Hello, Durbi81, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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responding to question
Hi Durbi81, I had a look at your sandbox (User:Durbi81/sandbox) per your request. I have a few pieces of feedback for you.
 * Once the subject of the article has been established, you generally refer to them by their surname in the rest of the article (MOS:SURNAME).
 * You have a floating URL that should be formatted as a reference. Click "cite", select "manual" and then choose "news", as your sources is a newspaper.
 * you have another bare URL at the end that should be formatted as a reference. Click "cite" to add it as a reference.
 * When you want to use the same citation twice, you can click "cite" then "reuse" to use a citation that you've already entered into your work
 * Make sure all content is cited. I've added a few "citation needed" tags to point out content that needs a citation. Generally, it's a red flag if a paragraph or section ends without a citation.

Let me know if you have any questions about this feedback. Once you address these issues, I think your work is ready to go live! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:31, 28 November 2018 (UTC)