User talk:Dustmysink/sandbox

1. The article describes the character and appearance of the plant well. However, nothing jumped out to me as impressive or turn of phrase. 2. I suggest that you use the scientific name of the species more frequently and be careful of sentence structure. This would make the article easier to read and sound more professional. 3. The most important thing you could do to improve the article is to use less pronouns. 4. I think that the gallery part of your article would be useful in my article. 5. You have 1279 words, good job.