User talk:Dylan66taylor

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Hello, Dylan66taylor, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Your article is looking good so far, you have plenty of sources to draw information from and already have it more organized than my article. Your article is so far very neutral. The one recommendation I have is to reword the sentence in your article body section. While it is accurate both informational and grammatically, it is a bit wordy and could lead to confusion for someone just skimming over it. You could also do some rebalancing of the full article's content, however that may just be due to the article being fairly short currently.

Semm321 (talk) 21:07, 11 October 2021 (UTC)