User talk:Dylan Randall Turner

Welcome!
Adakiko (talk) 13:09, 4 August 2022 (UTC)

Draft:The Piano Works
Your article seems overly promotional to me. wp:NOTPROMOTION. Please write with an encyclopedic wp:tone. A few lines that could use an adjustment:
 * Inspired by a visit to Chicago in 2014, founder and managing director... probably shouldn't be in the article.
 * The Piano works is one of the largest independent employers of musicians in England where over 1,100 musicians have delivered 14,000 performances each year since 2015
 * Maybe The Piano Works has employed 1,100 musicians who delivered 14,000 performances yearly since 2015. though could be better written.

Please limit The Piano Works external links. See wp:ELMINOFFICIAL

What is the AskForClive.com link for? How is it related to The Piano Works?

Thank you Adakiko (talk) 13:09, 4 August 2022 (UTC)

Are you employed, paid by, or related to The Piano Works?
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 * Dear @Adakiko, thank you for your questions and your comments. This is my first article so any help or suggestions are very much appreciated!
 * To answer your question, the background to this is that during the pandemic I helped 60 music and cultural venues to access emergency funding so they could survive. During that process I noticed that this sector appeared to be underrepresented on Wikipedia, and some of these organisations are very noteworthy, so I decided to in my spare time try and address that as its an area of particular interest to me, and selected the Piano Works as the first one as they are unique within the UK. I also plan to write articles for nightclubs FIRE, THE EAGLE, and EGG, all of which have a unique offering to the LGBTQI+ audiences both in London and worldwide. So this is very much a 'labour of love' not a conflict of interest.
 * Thank you for your suggestions to make changes. I tried to be as objective as possible and the article was rejected. As you know it takes considerable time to undertake the research needed, so I'm very keen to try again so as not to have wasted my time.
 * Best wishes
 * @Dylan Randall Turner Dylan Randall Turner (talk) 11:06, 14 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your reply. It can be difficult to write with an encyclopedic wp:tone. I would recommend you look at some similar articles; possibly copying their style. The wp:Simplified Manual of Style might be a good place to start for policy on article formatting and such. General notability guidelines WP:GNG and the section below on specific notability. A good place to ask questions is the wp:Teahouse. Hope this helps! Cheers Adakiko (talk) 11:40, 14 September 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Piano Works (August 5)
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McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 02:45, 5 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Dear @Mcmatter thank you for your feedback. I have revisited the language in the article to make this as 'matter of fact' as possible. One thing I did not understand was the reference 'refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed' as all of the citations are external references. If you have time to clarify that would be very helpful.
 * You'll see that this is my first Wikipedia article and I'm doing this in my spare time so fully understand that there is much to learn and your comments are appreciated!
 * Best wishes @Dylan Randall Turner Dylan Randall Turner (talk) 11:57, 14 September 2022 (UTC)


 * That "independent, reliable, published sources" would be items published by, as an ideal: The Times, The Scotsman, a major music rag, Rolling Stone (culture only). Something that isn't listed in pink or red here: WP:RSPSOURCES. Yellow isn't the best either. Avoid blogs, YouTube that is someone's personal channel, anything that is user-generated content wp:UGC and self-published sources wp:SPS Examples of UGC are Discogs and IMDB. wp:primary sources can be acceptable if they are not self-serving such as the CEO of a company. I've certainly skipped a lot here. You can search WP:RS/P in the search box a bit down from the top to see what the wp:consensus on a source is (if there is consensus). You should ask at the wp:Teahouse for specifics. The Teahouse answers may not be supported by WP:RS/P. Hope I haven't overwhelmed or confused you. Best of luck! Cheers Adakiko (talk) 12:57, 14 September 2022 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:The Piano Works
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 12:02, 14 February 2023 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:The Piano Works


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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Hey man im josh (talk) 13:32, 14 March 2023 (UTC)