User talk:E.6604

Agriculture in the United States
I appreciate your taking a stab at Agriculture in the United States and adding a Child labor section, but there are a few issues with your edit here. For one, it takes away the section on those under 20 working on farms. Many of those are not children, either colloquially (i.e. many are teenagers working with their families or others) and some are legal adults. Second, that paragraph you removed is not talking about "child labor" in the sense that term is used, which is exploitive illegal employment of those usually under about 14... it's talking about legal employment of youth. Nobody calls holding a job at McDonalds after school "child labor."

For subheadings use the == Heading == style, not the bolding. And add another pair of = to increase the header level, if necessary. Finally, I'm concerned that you've copied, or closely paraphrased much of this information. This report matches many sentences verbatim. I didn't do an indepth look, but I think much of that will need to be massively rephrased and restructured to comply with our policies on WP:COPYRIGHT and WP:PLAGIARISM.

I haven't undone your edit at this time, and I may work to reformat some of it in the future, but I'd appreciate it if you worked on addressing some of these issues. I don't want to discourage you, but in some cases data dumping like this is worse than having more information because it ruins the structure and focus that an encyclopedia provides. Shadowjams (talk) 05:45, 29 March 2013 (UTC)