User talk:EBCarleton/Gravel pit/Emma.Keary Peer Review

In the article body, you could be specific on what nutrients are typically found in these gravel pit lakes, and then hyperlink those resources to current or any other wikipedia page existing for further research.

the article body is rather detailed, but potentially splitting into sub headings could allow for great flow, this being starting a new heading for the aggregates section, as currently in transitions from glboal usage to sources of aggreagates.

some sentences start getting to long for example: " In remote regions served by isolated unpaved roads, gravel pit operations are often located at strategic intervals every few hundred kilometers along the roadway in conjunction with road maintenance camps to provide the maintenance crews working out of these camps with the necessary materials." - suggestion: In remote unpaved regions, gravel pit operations are stragetically placed every few hundred kilometers. Location is a response to the conjunction with road maintenence camps to provide working crews with neccessary materials.

great use of examples, some need to have citiations such as exmaple of the Dempster highway, this can also include hyperlinking to the wikipedia page.

good list of references, however a few a getting outdated, and could be beneficial to check on more recent sites, if information is still correct or relevent.