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Help on Carpentersville, Illinois
I see you're trying to add sources for that material on Carpentersville, Illinois. Thanks for doing that. I've gone in and fixed the template. All you were missing was the "=" sign between "url" and the URL. I've also tagged the article with. If you can fill out more paramaters in the template, please do so. Otherwise one of the good linkrot patrollers will come by and try to fix it up.

Don't be discouraged. A lot of new editors have problems with these citation templates. You'll get the hang of them quickly! Toddst1 (talk) 16:41, 3 October 2017 (UTC)
 * By the way, it's probably best to stay away from 2017 Las Vegas Strip shooting for a while - that article is under such scrutiny, it will be very difficult for a new editor like yourself to find success there and you can find yourself slapped with more templated messages like the ones above and get discouraged quickly.  I'm not saying you can't edit there, but I think there are easier places to "cut your teeth."  Toddst1 (talk) 16:44, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Carpentersville Middle School (March 11)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Carpentersville Middle School (March 15)
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• Gene93k (talk) 15:23, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Carpentersville Middle School (March 23)
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MatthewVanitas (talk) 04:11, 23 March 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Carpentersville Middle School (March 29)
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• Gene93k (talk) 04:02, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Asdfhgbjn
Hello EDG 543,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged Asdfhgbjn for deletion, because it doesn't appear to contain any encyclopedic content. Take a look at our suggestions for essential content in short articles to learn what should be included.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=&action=edit&section=new&preload=Template:Hangon_preload&preloadtitle=This+page+should+not+be+speedy+deleted+because...+ contest this deletion], but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions.

Slatersteven (talk) 14:46, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Carpentersville Middle School (April 5)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Carpentersville Middle School (April 6)
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EROS message 13:43, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

April 2018
Welcome to Wikipedia. Everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia. However, talk pages are meant to be a record of a discussion; deleting or editing legitimate comments, as you did at Draft talk:Carpentersville Middle School, is considered bad practice, even if you meant well. Even making spelling and grammatical corrections in others' comments is generally frowned upon, as it tends to irritate the users whose comments you are correcting. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Thank you. • Gene93k (talk) 21:40, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

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April 2018
Your recent editing history at Carpentersville Middle School shows that you are currently engaged in an edit war. To resolve the content dispute, please do not revert or change the edits of others when you are reverted. Instead of reverting, please use the talk page to work toward making a version that represents consensus among editors. The best practice at this stage is to discuss, not edit-war. See BRD for how this is done. If discussions reach an impasse, you can then post a request for help at a relevant noticeboard or seek dispute resolution. In some cases, you may wish to request temporary page protection.

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Word to the wise
If you keep up the insistence on citing the name of the school, you are likely to be blocked from editing very soon. Locking the article from being edited is the gentle way of stopping the argument -- but when someone comes back right away and starts the same edit war again, the next step is to block that person from editing. That's not a cool thing and would damage your future as a Wikipedian. So I suggest, just forget about it, walk away from that disagreement. If you can, walk away from that article. MPS1992 (talk) 20:27, 24 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Can you please explain to me why I can't cite the name of the school? How else am I supposed to prove it?" Also, not trying to argue/ get blocked. I just really want to know. Also, could you put it on the Carpentersville Middle School talk page please? EDG 543 (talk) 20:36, 24 April 2018 (UTC)


 * I think there has already been plenty of discussion about it on the article talk page. Until the balance of views on the article talk page changes, it's best not to add it back into the article. Sorry. MPS1992 (talk) 20:44, 24 April 2018 (UTC)


 * *sigh* Thanks anyway. I appreciate it.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Carpenter Park, Carpentersville has been accepted
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Joni Greene (May 21)
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Legacypac (talk) 16:06, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Ways to improve Vivo V9
Hi, I'm Kudpung. EDG 543, thanks for creating Vivo V9!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. Please complete and add sources. If you need longer, it  will  be moved to  draft  space.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 04:23, 23 May 2018 (UTC)

I did mark it as under construction so... EDG 543 (talk) 15:38, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
 * That's generally only for articles that have already been around for a while and are undergoing a short expansion or copy edit. The effort is to produce new articles in mainspace that are as complete as possible. For that, we put at your disposal your own sandbox where you can develop an article at your leisure until it is ready without being bothered by people like me. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 15:52, 23 May 2018 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. Didn't know about that. Thanks for the info. EDG 543 (talk) 16:19, 23 May 2018 (UTC)

Await Further Instructions moved to draftspace
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Your submission at Articles for creation: 2018 NFC Championship Game officiating controversy has been accepted
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Nomination of 2018 Kansas City Chiefs vs Los Angeles Rams for deletion
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Williams FW24
Hi, I noticed that if Febuary you added pov to Williams FW24. Can I ask why? I've just read the article and I think it is neutral, however it hasn't been changed since then so I wonder why you think the article doesn't observe WP:NPOV, I think it would propbaly be best if you responded on the talk page. Thanks, SSSB (talk) 11:09, 2 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Question answered here. Thanks, EDG 543 (talk) 16:44, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

IVG773
Hey, I wanted to propose to change the name of the Angelo Carpenter article to Julius Angelo Carpenter. How do I do that?


 * Saved you the trouble. I suppose if you wanted to move another one you could view WP:RM or I could explain it to you in simpler terms. Also, don't forget to Support the move! Thanks, EDG 543 (talk) 12:36, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

Talk page comments
Hi EDG

I reverted your removal of another persons talk page comments as I don't believe they fall under those listed at WP:TPO. AIR<b style="color: green;">corn</b> (talk) 18:48, 2 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Hello. I don't understand how their edit was constructive. They were off topic since the section was about a move, not a deletion. Even if it was about the deletion, he gave no reason except that he thinks Saints fans are griping. It was rude and unnecessary. Please explain to clear up my confusion. Thanks, EDG 543 (talk) 19:05, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

Nomination of University of North Carolina at Charlotte shooting for deletion
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Talk page guidelines
Hi there, re: [this], talk pages are for discussing specific changes to the article, not for soapboxing about your personal discomfort with whatever issues make you uncomfortable. Please avoid editorialising and stay on topic in the future. Thank you. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 14:58, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Sorry about that. Thank you for that. Thanks, EDG 543 (talk) 15:05, 22 May 2019 (UTC)

Nomination of University of North Carolina at Charlotte shooting for deletion
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Vivo X7 (July 14)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: 2018 NBA Finals Game 1 (July 31)
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August 2019
Hello, I'm Coffeeandcrumbs. I noticed that you made an edit concerning content related to a living (or recently deceased) person   on 2019 El Paso shooting, but you didn't support your changes with a citation to a reliable source, so I removed it. Wikipedia has a very strict policy concerning how we write about living people, so please help us keep such articles accurate and clear. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you! --- Coffee  and crumbs  22:27, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

"In police custody" doesn't sound oddly newsy to you?
Does to me, but no huge deal. InedibleHulk (talk) 22:49, August 3, 2019 (UTC)


 * It's kind of normal around here -- this usage would be less common in the UK, but still understood -- and also provides very slightly more information than "were arrested". I often find myself getting "oddly newsy", because most of the sources I look at are newspapers. Often from many years ago... MPS1992 (talk) 22:54, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Yeah, it's common. "Law enforcement officials" instead of police, too. But if everyone else jumped off a bridge? Gotta keep our reading and editing separate, to an extent. We're not paid by the word on this side. InedibleHulk (talk) 22:59, August 3, 2019 (UTC)
 * On another review, I think you are probably right. Thank you to both of you for updating articles regarding recent events, but EDG, please could you follow the sources rather less obediently? MPS1992 (talk) 23:33, 3 August 2019 (UTC)


 * The next 157 bytes of hollow redundancy are a big deal. Explain. InedibleHulk (talk) 22:51, August 3, 2019 (UTC)


 * I don't understand why you reverted my edits. You just seem like you are unnecessarily simplifying the article. Have you ever considered editing in Simple English Wikipedia? Thanks, EDG 543 (talk) 23:02, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * It's not unnecessary, concise writing is read and parsed quicker than eloquent and winding stuff. Facts stayed the same. Simple Wikipedia cuts the facts. InedibleHulk (talk) 23:12, August 3, 2019 (UTC)
 * I had no idea you wrote it, so wasn't trying to revert anyone. Just noticed a clunky chunk. Nothing personal. InedibleHulk (talk) 23:15, August 3, 2019 (UTC)
 * If we're going to get picky, this edit removed facts, but... everything will probably change again in the next few hours. MPS1992 (talk) 23:35, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * To split hairs, one fact. Does it help anyone to know a hospital spokesperson was involved in relaying the more pertinent transfer info? Doubt it. InedibleHulk (talk) 23:42, August 3, 2019 (UTC)
 * OK so you want to split hairs about which exact hospital spokespeople said what about what? And meanwhile, I will assume you are behind the curve, and that this EDG person is more up to date? Please all encourage each other when you update articles. MPS1992 (talk) 03:15, 4 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Not quite what happened. Close enough, maybe. I still think you're both cool enough to keep up the good work here, for what it's worth. InedibleHulk (talk) 04:27, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Await Further Instructions (film)


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Could you please help me with editing?
Hi, I need help with adding entries to a list called the List of fugitives from justice who disappeared. I have contacted you because your name was on a list that a Wikipedia administer gave to me. Do you think you could help me out? Davidgoodheart (talk) 22:01, 9 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi ! I'd be happy to help you with anything you need. What exactly do you need help with? Also, if you don't mind me asking, what list did you see my name on? Thanks, EDG 543 (talk) 17:59, 10 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi, the first task is that I need is for you to add people from Category:Unsolved murders in Russia to the List of unsolved murders who aren't on the list already. Also I saw your name on WikiProject Crime and Criminal Biography list that a Wikipedia administrator recommended to me when I told him I need help with edting. Davidgoodheart (talk) 01:28, 12 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Alright, I'll try to get on it tomorrow (Tuesday). Thanks, EDG 543 (talk) 00:09, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much. There are many entries from different countries that need adding, but with help I might be able to get them all added soon. Davidgoodheart (talk) 09:40, 15 October 2019 (UTC)

Nomination of Vivo V2 for deletion
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Proposed deletion of Vivo V1


The article Vivo V1 has been proposed for deletion&#32;because of the following concern: "What makes this product (phone) notable? I couldn't find any review in an outlet that seems reliable and not just blog advert or a rewritten press releases. Fails WP:GNG (also similar situation to Articles for deletion/Vivo V2)."

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Proposal at the Village Pump to streamline the welcome template
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Thank you for the welcome!
Thank you for the warm welcome EDG 543. I'll let you know any questions I may have. --Maverick 355 (talk) 00:02, 19 March 2020 (UTC)
 * You're very welcome, Maverick 355. I will be happy to help you with any issue or question- no matter how big or small. Thanks, EDG 543 (talk) 17:21, 21 March 2020 (UTC)

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You may benefit from using RedWarn
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 * Wow! This is so easy to use and is a life saver! I have literally been doing a lot of reverting lately and this makes it so much faster and easier. Thank you so much for suggesting it to me! Thanks, EDG 543 (talk) 20:52, 10 September 2020 (UTC)
 * No problem! Glad to hear you enjoy it. Pro tip: if you'd like to save some time when reverting vandalism and warning people, open your RedWarn Preferences and set "on rollback completion" (under the behavior settings) to your prefered option, such as new notice, which will automatically open the warn user dialog. <span style="font-family:'Roboto',sans-serif;font-weight:300;text-shadow: 2px 2px 10px black;color:black;">Ed  talk!  21:01, 10 September 2020 (UTC)

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Rollback granted
Hi EDG 543. After reviewing your request for "rollbacker", I have [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special%3ALog&type=rights&user=&page=User%3AEDG_543 enabled] rollback on your account. Keep in mind these things when going to use rollback: If you no longer want rollback, contact me and I'll remove it. Also, for some more information on how to use rollback, see Administrators' guide/Rollback (even though you're not an admin). I'm sure you'll do great with rollback, but feel free to leave me a message on my talk page if you run into troubles or have any questions about appropriate/inappropriate use of rollback. Thank you for helping to reduce vandalism. Happy editing! <b style="font-family:Papyrus"> Anarchyte </b> ( talk •  work ) 04:25, 15 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Getting rollback is no more momentous than installing Twinkle.
 * Rollback should be used to revert clear cases of vandalism only, and not good faith edits.
 * Rollback should never be used to edit war.
 * If abused, rollback rights can be revoked.
 * Use common sense.

September 2020
Consider this a warning that your behavior at User talk:Iiswhoiisbxtch was unacceptable and I came very close to blocking you. Editors have every right to remove warnings from their user talk pages although archiving is preferred. Please study our policy on edit warring and never engage in that behavior again. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  17:06, 16 September 2020 (UTC)
 * One of your 3RR reverts was a misuse of the rollback permission you were granted just yesterday. I've put a 1 month expiry date on the permission to allow an evaluation of your use of it over the next month. Cabayi (talk) 17:12, 16 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your mercy in not blocking me. I do, now, realize the error of my ways. I thought that the user was trying to hide evidence in the sockpuppet case, and I was completely wrong in what I did. Thank you very much for showing me that I was wrong, I wasn't trying to be malicious, I just thought that I was doing the right thing at the time. If you notice me screwing somehting else up, please don't hesitate to warn me like you did this itme. Thanks, EDG 543 (talk) 17:16, 16 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Yes, I was wrong with what I was doing. I will be much more careful in the future. But, may I ask, after the month is over, will I need to reapply or anything like that? Thanks, EDG 543 (talk) 17:19, 16 September 2020 (UTC)
 * I have made additional comments about your behavior at User talk:Iceinabucket which I hope you will take seriously. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  17:29, 16 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Yes, you'll need to reapply. You can reapply a couple of days before it expires on the 16th if you want to avoid a gap. Cabayi (talk) 17:33, 16 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for adding the expiry date. I'd have probably revoked the permission immediately after this blatant misuse of the tools, but I think your approach will be better for everyone. <b style="font-family:Papyrus"> Anarchyte </b> ( talk &#8226;  work ) 04:37, 17 September 2020 (UTC)