User talk:EEdnacot/sandbox

Great Job!
I went through your sandbox and made a few suggestions as to rephrasing some sentences and adding sources. Overall i think your contributions will make the article better. I much prefer the changes you made to the lead sections and the process section than what was originally there. Feel free to ignore any suggestions you don't agree with and good luck. CristianBaltazar (talk) 04:02, 12 May 2020 (UTC)