User talk:EKays3838/sandbox

One question/ clarification I have is how is Devourer an archetype and in what sense? Is it a generational thing? How is it undoubtedly a characteristic of the human condition if its a religion? Is it that the aspects of evil which are evident throughout humanity are the archetype? Big.macncheese (talk) 17:26, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

The first section makes a lot of sense and is well written. There seems to be too much information in the Religious/mythological section of your article. It seems like better word choice could have been used in the pitch section. The Pitch section could also use some more information, since it seems to be lacking compared to other sections. It seems like the final section is also a little too biased/based on personal opinion. The article seems to have good word choice, but could use better word choice in the first section. User:Niezgoda.kevin