User talk:ENGWstudent/sandbox

Wikipedia project peer review
Hi Dan,

I have read over the edits you have done to your article. What you have done so far is strong and I think has added value to your article. I think that especially the addition of sources has greatly increased the quality of your article. However, I think the article you are editing is very weak and there are a few other small changes you might be able to make to improve its quality. Even just expanding more on the clinical trials you mentioned under the treatment section might be helpful. Overall good job! Bluedog02 (talk) 15:29, 29 November 2022 (UTC)