User talk:ESloanNI

Ways to improve Controlled Schools' Support Council
Hi, I'm Velella. ESloanNI, thanks for creating Controlled Schools' Support Council!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. Needs a much better and wiki-linked explnation of what Controlled Schools are in the opening paragraph. Even the explantation at the end is far from clear for a reader not in NI. Nice use of apostrophes, although not sure whether the apostrophe is correct. Do the schools as an entity own the Council ?

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

 Velella  Velella Talk 15:42, 27 April 2017 (UTC)