User talk:EXPLODINGWAFFLES

I need help on a essay can yall tell me if it sounds good?

I believe that you should not take your life for granted. The reason I say this because, you never know what can happen. I have experienced this in my life, and to tell you the truth I never thought this could even happen to my family. One day my dad picked me up from school, which was weird because my mom and dad are divorced and he never picks me up. When he did, we got in the car and he wouldn’t say a word to me, I kept asking what was going on, still no answer. Then about 30 minutes later we arrived at Vanderbilt Children’s Hospital. Then we walked in and went up the elevator and down the hall into this room. My whole family was in there, except for my brother. We stood outside the room then my aunt came out and talked to me, I could see though the glass my mother crying, so I busted out into tears. Anyway my aunt sat me down and told me my brother, Tim, has a brain tumor, at first I was like what is that then when she told me I started to cry harder. Turns out that this was a very rare tumor, and he could have died from it. Now he is fine and the tumor is almost gone, but that’s not my point. See my point is that I until that day I thought that only happened to some families. What most people don’t see is that it can happen any day any time, to anyone. Also, even if you are mad someone, never and I mean never go to bed or walk away mad. Because anything can happen, and if they get in a car wreck or get shot even. You will regret it for the rest of your life. If you are fully capable of doing something then do it. Because there are millions of people out there that can’t walk, talk, or even move for that matter. So don’t just sit on your couch and be a lazy bum, because trust me when I say this you will regret it one day, if you get into a serious accident. You may listen to this and think that’s it is stupid, but I am serious. People who get paralyzed in accidents they regret not doing all the stuff they wanted to do as a kid, they regret being a couch potato when they were capable of moving. Anyway my point in that stop being a lazy bum, and live everyday like it’s your last. Don’t ever take your life for granted, you never know what can happen tomorrow or the next day. Live for the moment; do not worry about wants going to happen next.