User talk:E locke2018/sandbox

Starting a talk page for feedback about my biography for Sarah B Henderson--E locke2018 (talk) 19:37, 8 November 2018 (UTC)

The first sentence could use a citation--Agates99 (talk) 00:29, 9 November 2018 (UTC)

You may want to double check that your twitter source is considered a reliable source and not a source of the likes of a blog--Agates99 (talk) 00:37, 9 November 2018 (UTC)

I noticed that for a couple of your sources you have them listed multiple times throughout your references section. There is an option to reuse a source throughout the article that helps with preventing repetition in your references--Agates99 (talk) 00:40, 9 November 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure that it is a requirement but in the section of selected publications it could be good to give a brief overview of her top one or two most cited works--Agates99 (talk) 00:42, 9 November 2018 (UTC)

From what I could see, you only have three or four secondary sources including the news. You may want to consider adding more to fit the requirements for a wikipedia article--Agates99 (talk) 00:53, 9 November 2018 (UTC)

Are there any sources other than "Recognizing Women in Fire Science" that discuss the notability of Henderson's work? Her position in itself may be notable so this is simply food for thought and not a claim that she is not notable enough. Also, it could be good to mention her citations on google scholar to reinforce her notability--Agates99 (talk) 01:01, 9 November 2018 (UTC)