User talk:EaglesEyes1/Insects as food/Margaretbhanna Peer Review

Peer review response
Hi @Margaretbhanna,

Thanks for your comments and suggestions in your peer review.

-Good idea on the transitional words. I had been more focused on the content/facts, it could use some more massaging for flow.

-Excellent questions you pose regarding food safety concerns. I was intrigued reading your questions and they are a good jumping off point for more content and context to what I had originally provided.

-Yes, I was missing a citation. I had copy-edited a poorly written statement from the original but hadn't gone looking for a reference to support that statement. I can rectify that.

This peer-review process has actually been pretty beneficial. Thanks for your feedback and questions, I will put them to good use.

Ciao,

EaglesEyes1 (talk) 02:17, 11 March 2023 (UTC)