User talk:Ebago3/sandbox

One thing this article does well is that it remains neutral even when faced with the author's passion towards the subject. It must be hard not telling people how great this film is when writing! One thing I would recommend is to add more information about the media in the "abstract" section of the article. For instance, the type of media is not directly stated (film, play, screenplay, etc.). Also, so far, only the abstract and plot sections are added. The author will likely add more, but it would be nice to see the structure going on with the article as your writing. For instance, a section about critical reception or other films it has been influenced by might be beneficial. The most important thing that could be done to improve is to add more detail in the plot section. The section gives more of a point-by-point display of information rather than a flow that would give a good sense of the film. Jcerritos2432 (talk) 14:16, 25 October 2021 (UTC) -- The article does a good job of summarizing the movie. One challenge may be including all the important details while not giving any spoilers. I would suggest talking about more than the plot of the film. For example, you can talk about reviews, awards (if it won or was nominated for any), or any social significance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aniesha D. (talk • contribs) 14:24, 25 October 2021 (UTC) -- -The plot of the movie and article's introduction are written concisely and clearly. The article includes a link to another Wikipedia article about Vietnam war resisters, which can help the reader better understand plot of movie.

-Some changes that can be made are
 * Add citations to show sources of info in this article.
 * Include more info about when/where/how movie was produced, people involved with the production of the film (actors/actresses, producers, directors, musicians, etc), quotes from notable people about what the movie did well and how the movie could have been improved, and movie's impact on society.

-The most important thing to improve about the piece is to add info that highlights the movie's notability. Examples of info that can be added are names/descriptions of notable people/organizations involved with film's production, quotes from notable people about their views on film, and awards the movie received.

Vgao1 (talk) 14:43, 25 October 2021 (UTC)