User talk:Ebert97/sandbox

Peer Review Comments:


 * I like the focus on editing the history of the page, Homelessness in San Francisco. I am definitely shocked by how vague and short this page is!


 * Would hope to see some more information about how this issue is being addressed (policy, organizations, movements etc). I like the higher level direction that you are moving towards as for changing San Francisco to the Bay Area. This direction may help you find more information about how homelessness is changing and regions that are more/less impacted.


 * Can use a larger variety of sources to no only capture that quantitative information about homelessness but also the qualitative, more human side of it. Obviously, this information may be political, but I think that it would be a good addition to this page to have. If you are able to find enough sources and articles about both sides of the political/ideal spectrum, include a balance of them. Additionally, as homelessness is a personal issue, it would be nice to include sources or references to sources that have interviews and direct connections to people who are or were homeless.


 * Most of the sources that you currently have seem to be slightly dated. Do you have recent sources/papers? Even if the more recent sources are not as reputable, it would be great to still include their conclusions while indicating their bias.

Possible resources to use:

Well cited article about national history of homelessness and history of related policies: https://www.medscape.com/viewarticle/481800