User talk:Ebhughes20/sandbox

= Peer Review =

Overall
The structure of article is good however, I would take out the Limitations Section out from under the Chemical Weathering Processes and make it a seperate section. You could also add a section on the applicability of the method in terms of mining or environmental surveying, giving a holistic view on the topic. The tone is neutral and formal, which is great! Your sources all look credible and I like how many links you put in the article; since this topic requires lots of background information to understand, having these links makes it more digestible.

Lead Section
Instead of saying "a way of predicting," opt for the phrase "a method of predicting." The lead section nicely summarizes the topic, well done!

Chemical Weathering Processes
I really liked how you started with history behind the processes; I think it is especially relevant since the method is named after someone. The graphic nicely explains the process as well, that is a great addition. The paragraph nicely flows and you define the jargon within the text which is great. I would link the word "precipitation." in the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph. I'm not sure if the last sentence of the last paragraph is relevant to the rest of the section.

Bowen's Reaction Series
I would link or define "plagioclase-feldspar." I would link as many minerals mentioned in the text as possible so that the reader can toggle back and forth between articles. I suggest putting a graphical representation of the Bowen Reaction Series, one that has some of the minerals mentioned so that the reader can compare the differences in formation conditions.

Goldich Series Application to Soil Profiles
Great paragraph, wouldn't change anything!

Limitations of the Series
When you say "based on the same work," I'm not sure if you're referring to Goldlich's work or to the 2003 study, can you clarify a bit more? Are there certain weathering processes that have been identified to not follow Goldlich?

Pwise8 (talk) 16:30, 3 November 2021 (UTC)